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Posts : 434 Join date : 01/05/2009 Age : 30 Location : Punta Sta. Ana Mla.
| Subject: Ecchi-kun's corner Mon May 25, 2009 3:19 pm | |
| well i think its time i posted it up here ^__^... i have written poems before and placed them on my blog in friendster... well this is the few that i've typed.... there's like 50+ that i haven't typed yet and not even bothering to type them since they are so long and reminds me of the f****d up days.... ahhh this works are from my emo days so yeah there are bound to be cheesy lines and such please bear with it... ^__^ BTW pls comment on them... For me my greatest work: - Spoiler:
31 Months Of High School
For in the current pain I'll tell a story that is so lame For when death came I became so tame
It all started with this beautiful girl Beauty and brains she have it in her So simple and pure i cannot stop starring at her With childish attitude I was so attracted at her
For months i kept what i felt Everytime I was with her my tongue would melt I was like a drunk man not sure about what i tell I loved her with all my heart is what i can tell
Then came this faithful day The sin of others i must pay She got mad of that stupid prank The reason was shallow but i sank
T'was too late when i knew Secret feeling, she loved me too I was so hurt, pleaded for forgiveness But her heart placed me in nothingness
12 months pass She was still fragile as glass I was afraid that her anger would last Came this girl, said she'd help me and it was a blast
She was as simple as the first For knowledge she had a thirst Boyish she was like But I was attracted to her like light
We became close Then this night came she agreed to help The long fight with the 1st was dosed I was so glad that the problem is dealt
But come to me I was pain free But the feeling before was forever lost We settled for friendship we had a toast
To this new girl i was attracted I taped my broken heart that was fracted We became close friends Meet up alot, we would tend
Our friendship developed love we found When i admitted she was dumbfound Then came this day It was our grandest day
At first it was good At first it was fine We shared our food I always share what is mine
2 months pass It was Christmas at last I gave her my all she gave me none But nothing in the world ca compare to be with her it was always greater than
After a month We were at our 3rd glorious month I was so happy, I was in love Until i was notified of our gone dove
I mourned Slight emo i turned For my most loved dove is forever gone She was sad my smiles was scarce almost near gone
Then came that day That very devastating day T'was the 31st of the 1st When i cried out in a burst
She was gone Forever not mine She couldn't cope of what I had in mind I though she would since she was mine
Left and right I tried to run Why did she leave me under the sun For the pain was so great The amount of tears was just as great
Emo i was to death i almost turned And all those sweet smiles turned to dust that burned I was in Fear, I was in shock In my room i was always locked
To the songs i hear I thank them, they lessen my tears Left and right i looked for a way Looking for a way to shed the pain away
I found a way A way to be free And it was a new hobby for me 7 months passed i reached my goal it did alot
This hobby literally bought colors back to my life I do it even at flight Happiness is what turned from all the fright I'm back, back from the grave and ready to face life
I mourned, I cried, I was in pain All those beasts that i tamed Dear me, dear me Please just leave me be
O sweet dust of the past Kiss my lips for your one last leave me be, leave me be So i can enjoy my days as it lasts
O why, o why ghost of the past Turn away with all your lust For when i hear the songs i remember the past Pleas leave me be ghost of the past
Take all the people that your used to pain me Take them all and leave me be All the memories take them with you as you leave I just want to be free
This is me, this is my story I hope i forget, i really do After all I'm just a person too I might get on your nerves, you might get mad, but remember you are nothing like me
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Death Wish For Peace
i have a wish a very simple wish to die upon your arms and be severed from these very leash infatuation this is no more i have gone beyond those silly trap doors
don't show me those thornless roses forever i want to be the thorns of those bushes trapped i may be in this illusion leave me not my favorite confusion
deliver me the final blow inhale me and forever flow i will never ever leave your side i will protect you with all my pride
forever this is not that why i want you to tie my final knot angels will sing upon me if i died with you together we'll ride the sky that is so blue
can you be my mine you'll be my gold that will always shine destiny it may not be but who cares about destiny, not me
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Open Your Eyes My Love
You are my highest dream When can you and i be called a team This is true, your life is my well being And i will stop them even if i'm bleeding
Through those hours of effort This little trash i made came forth The effort i put on to this What tiny factor did you really miss
I don't know if your on my line But to me there was no glory to the byline The sentimental value imbued upon it Was obliterated the momment i got badly hit
I crashed and burned I forgot which lane i had turned 3 minutes is what it took me to remember I missed you like hell took over
In the light of twilight you can never see The plans of the demons around you and me I promise that i'll protect you against their claws I would even defy my very own laws
Be careful my princess For i may not be there in you distress If anything happens to you I'll hate myself for the promise i didn't do
Lay your trust in me Your knight in shinning armor i will be I'll keep you safe from those beasts And always remember, i love thee
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Posts : 434 Join date : 01/05/2009 Age : 30 Location : Punta Sta. Ana Mla.
| Subject: Re: Ecchi-kun's corner Mon May 25, 2009 3:20 pm | |
| CONTINUATION - Spoiler:
And The Story Begins To Unfold A story of a knight and a princess i was told It starts with the princess' fate already foretold to be loved or hated in every situation With her knowght by her side at every occasion
Something is new, Something is fresh in this fairytale to be You will feel the pressure if you'd read it with me This story is not for the weak, broken, and the bleeding For there is no such thing as a happy ending
It started with the knight fighting a mock battle All the while the princess was making tea with her royal kettle The knight's aim was straight and true Up on his horse his opponent he threw
The hand of the fair princess he had won Upon the victory against those who fight as one The people cheered for the new king without knowing the great dangers that are lurking
The day came when the dragon had glared For a long time at the princess it had stared the king was shocked, the king was surprised He didn't know such danger could suddenly arise
The princess was kidnapped by the fierce dragon The king lost his mind thinking the princess is forever gone He didn't know the princess was testing him the king T'was a test to see if the princess is the king's well being
For the love he has for the princess He went to save her from her distress As soon as he arrived the dragon had glared T'was then he realized he was really scared
For he wanted the princess to be his wife He would sacrifice even his own life He prayed to God and charged into the unknown With a prayer that he didn't want to be alone
With his mighty sword he fought alone And with his courage and determination the dragon was blown He learned the truth with the roll of a dice He said to the princess, you are my grandest prize
You need not to test my love for thee You know that your very important to me And if there is no forever now, why even bother Let's die together, so we can start forever
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Liar Liar Burn In Fire
When the sharpest blade hits my face I have already counted my remaining days Through those four pillars I laid my weight Thinking is this really my fate
Only two ants know of the murder Why didn't they alarm the colony or the master Mountains apart they shared information Through the air it spread around the nation
Crystal clear, you can see every bit There are too many candles here that are brightly lit All I wanted was to ask a question But they overtook my my previous action
Devastating it was for me Head on collision this will be I have prepared together with my team Until this lady shot a lightning beam
In a flash everything changed Even my theory got all rearranged There are too many flaws in your plan of action Especially at the bend of intersection
Hats are worn to find the fail But the traces sang like a nightingale Amatuer your work was like Your traces are in my every spike
Your still an average joe Don't tell me you didn't feel the flow When the clif is this steep Better go ahead, go read it and weep
The pain, it still wanders This is caused by all those fakers No man can prove left is right I promise, I'm not stubborn not bright
Thieves cannot steal my loot As long as I hold this pen of truth Through all the events I've learned This painful punishment I truly earned
I must severe the ties for a momentary pause For I have already suffered such a great loss I wish this is the last I get burned burned by fire For I don't want to die in a friendly-fire
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Prison Escape
From your prison I am finally free Killed al the inmates who was with me Again I can breathe the fresh air For I'm finally free from your heavy glare
Ten thousand pieces i picked and glued While sorting out the dirt imbued Straighten my road with no lefts and rights For tommorow I don't want to lose my precious sight
For the king's will can never be broken My faith to you I've already proven Pick you path and move on Before you know it I'm already gone
Don't break a sweat For I'm the one who lost the bet For I lost my path and dropped my pearl And an angel can never be the devil's girl
Tis finally done, to a man i have grown I learned to face the truth on my very own The sun shines bright and proud I'm sorry for being so loud
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Princess There Is No Forever
In the world of pain and suffering, forever there is none In time even diamonds will all be gone Trust in my words and heal the wounds No one can avoid the way of the goons
This pen that i hold only writes what is right I know the truth hurts when its this bright When the mighty sword swings I know the pain, it really stings
The treasure inside this heavy vault It leaks fast, fast as a lightning bolt Hold hands and never let go Just smile, don't let the pain show
I treat you as my lovely and respectful wife You know this truth, you are my life They say till death do us part But even in death we will never part
I am waiting for this blade to strike my heart For in death, its where forever will start You are my most important treasure I'll never leave your rest assured
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Verdict Of A Broken Rose
Every night I prayed to God Every night my tears would flood Wishing that you'll make the right decision I wish this wasn't pin point precision
I am fully broken To this bottomless pit I've fallen I am happy for you But I'm sorry to say a life is in due
When the stakes drip blood You would hear this painful thud Thorns shall fly into the sky You'll never live the life of lies
The river may seem calm and odd But everything can't be settled by thick face and cold blood For a spider's house is full of information Only the strong can go in full motion
The pain to see the roses bloom Brings my face to this painful gloom Through my blood and life I promised Princess, no information shall be missed
Its just a matter of how you bury your nails If buried deep your foundation wouldn't fail Listen to the people around you if not, your willing to fall from this plateu
There is no turning back For the past is already in black I know I'm not the one for you Heaven and hell, I'm too far from you
Don't worry, don't fear the sky I'll catch you even if I die To most of my nightmare I am awake I just don't want to die in this teary lake
The time is near Time where heaven will be struck by fear I must be ready, I must prepare For i will slay the dragon in its very lair
For now i lay my trust in faith That there will be no such thing as a bait May this gold be pure For storms and hurricanes it must endure
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Posts : 434 Join date : 01/05/2009 Age : 30 Location : Punta Sta. Ana Mla.
| Subject: Re: Ecchi-kun's corner Mon May 25, 2009 3:22 pm | |
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Flashback
As I lie here in awe A flashback came to be That in this fairytale there is no flaw For time seeks revenge on me
As history repeats itself I finally understood what it felt To be left in the sun to cry for help Tis the exact same poison that was dealt
When will the moon be full For I seek the message in the air I'm tired of being a fool When will this bark spark up and flare
To the philosopher I wanted to ask How mortals overcome a herculean task And will the road lead to the same town For I want to be the one to revert a frown
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Fairy Tales Do Come True
As I lie here in awe A flashback came to be That in this fairytale there is no flaw For time seeks revenge on me
As history repeats itself I finally understood what it felt To be left in the sun to cry for help Tis the exact same poison that was dealt
When will the moon be full For I seek the message in the air I'm tired of being a fool When will this bark spark up and flare
To the philosopher I wanted to ask How mortals overcome a herculean task And will the road lead to the same town For I want to be the one to revert a frown
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1 Year Fragments
1 year had passed I didn't know the feeling would last The reality I've grasped Even when time flew so fast
In my dreams I graduated But in reality I was in denial That when I found out I miscalculated And I really thought my decision was final
Throught the trials and errors It was where I found the clues That even though the year has been a terror Without my treaure I'm in the blues
Even tough its a year full of fragments I still gained failures and accomplishments That i envy the awarded of honor And that no one can be your succesor
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The Day's Final Stop
And as the day ends bitterweet We took a reast and just talked And as the rain pours to give a beat Up high in the trees is where we stalked
Converstation about the pains of the past Ideal for the oncoming Future Even when the flight didn't last It was one hell of an adventure
I know the shock of the truth I may not seem like it but i know alot Though it doesn't sound like the flute What matters is where you place your dot
To see the sturdy get shaken Tis like seeing a child get frightened And though I was sad after the play I thank you for you made my day
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On This Waiting Shed
On this waiting shed a story is once told A boy and a girl who into one had mold Through the pits and cracks they've fallen In the end teh boy was broken
If only the chains were stronger Even at full force it would have held together It's okay for do much he has learned For time waits for no man to return
For the night longs for the warmth of day The children rest for tommorrow the play In the desert the sun will glare To see the water anywhere you stare
For the people believe in the strenght of faith Watching as he push the poison apple that he ate Follow the flow and llisten to this genre Just to see the light of the sun god ra
To live in the dream house the man was paying Its like seeing a child in a pool just playing To death this rose has bled Don't forget we once waited on this shed
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Supposed To Be Pretend
As the stars of tonight shine The clicks and taps as the messages come forth Choosing and sorting out the perfect lines I realized time no matter how long, is really short
It was all supposed to be pretend But who could avoid the spirit of a fine wine I tried hard just to mend and blend But this truth is so hard to decline
Our bitter past do you remember The times when I was stubborn and impatient Can we go back and put it all together I just want to say my final statement
Back then I was stupid and younger I'm no jesus christ, I'm not born in a manger I go charging into the unknown with my heavy lance Thinking "if I live on, is there a second chance"
BTW... some of my other poems got lost somewhere(my 2nd best work T__T) so i'll look for them... sorry if they are super long hehehe... PS. There are 3 posts of mine that are posted simultaneously(multipost) but this is because the messaged got too long and it became neccesary... sorry.. ^__^ | |
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| Subject: Re: Ecchi-kun's corner Mon May 25, 2009 3:55 pm | |
| hmmm... i didnt that ur a poet.... ahahaha... ^^ | |
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| Subject: Re: Ecchi-kun's corner Tue May 26, 2009 1:10 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Ecchi-kun's corner Tue May 26, 2009 9:28 am | |
| yeah......looooong..... though they are all good but.... looong... hehehhe that would be hard to layout in a literary section in a newspaper hehehhe but they are all good really!!!! nice!! i cant make that long poems hehehe | |
| | | 俺 は エッチ。 Admin
Posts : 434 Join date : 01/05/2009 Age : 30 Location : Punta Sta. Ana Mla.
| Subject: Re: Ecchi-kun's corner Tue May 26, 2009 10:48 am | |
| wahaha... we had a project about making a dummy-paper and we used 3 of my works.... it occupied a lot of space on the paper ... hahaha... did you read them all O__O if so i'm very grateful ^__^ | |
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